Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Stein Response 9/23

By reading the second part of How to Write by Stein. I have noticed some differences between the two sections. The first section seemed to be more rhythm and it seemed to be more random sentences. This section seemed to be more Peripatetic style of writing, where she took a sentence and basically for at least three or four sentences afterward just took the original and changed the words around. Honestly I found this section harder to read because it seemed very repetitive using this style and it was hard to get the idea of what she was saying or portraying. It did seem rhythmic again in this section as well as the first section. Overall I don't know if i enjoyed reading this reading more than the first reading because it just seemed a little harder to follow.

Zaum Translation:
Devient marque de fonctionne
moniteur official sel plastique
minerale sur adaptee
rapport marche region passe

deviant marked the function
monitor official plastic
mineral sir adapt
report mark region pass

becomes brand works
monitor official plastic salt
adapted on mineral
report goes walking area

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